Daughter_of_the_King
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| 01/31/2011 11:03 PM |
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So I have this guy friend and were agreed to think about going out I guess haha. Any way I was thinking for Valentines day I could write him a song?
Would that be weird or does that sound like a good idea? |
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 02/01/2011 12:13 AM |
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That sounds like a great idea!!! Just don't get into the whole "You're mine/you're everything I ever wanted" sort of mush... that comes later  |
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Becka
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| 02/01/2011 3:27 AM |
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What Darcie said.  |
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my blog - http://beckasramblings.blogspot.com/
previously Jessamae.
the beauty of grace is that it makes life not fair - Relient K |
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Daughter_of_the_King
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| 02/01/2011 9:34 PM |
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| Okay thanks! I'm really excited about this but kinda worried all at the same time :/ |
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love*
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| 02/01/2011 10:25 PM |
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| aw sweet |
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Beckah
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| 02/02/2011 2:30 PM |
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| that is a really sweet thing to do! kinda romantic, well only if you want to be. haha good luck. |
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"Check yourself before you wreck yourself" |
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JoJo
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| 02/03/2011 1:10 AM |
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| I guess you could write a song, but make it more funny, not soppy, as you're not officially dating etc |
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Turn up the music
Turn it up loud
Take a few chances
Let it all out
'Cause you won't regret it
Lookin' back from where you have been
'Cause it's not who you knew
And it's not what you did
It's how you live
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God Bless!
Mwah XOXO
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Daughter_of_the_King
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| 02/04/2011 9:52 AM |
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Thanks for your support all I have is the first verse hahaha! But my friend said it was good and didn't sound gushy or any thing lolz. Do y'all want to see what I have so far?
@JoJo what do you mean by soppy? |
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Beckah
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| 02/04/2011 4:41 PM |
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| Yes, Yes, Yes!!! please share. lol |
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"Check yourself before you wreck yourself" |
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Daughter_of_the_King
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| 02/04/2011 4:47 PM |
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| Okay I do not have my song book with me at the time. But I will share as soon as possible |
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JoJo
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| 02/05/2011 2:58 AM |
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| soppy, its like mushy and loveydovey etc... haha |
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Turn up the music
Turn it up loud
Take a few chances
Let it all out
'Cause you won't regret it
Lookin' back from where you have been
'Cause it's not who you knew
And it's not what you did
It's how you live
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God Bless!
Mwah XOXO
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Daughter_of_the_King
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| 02/06/2011 3:18 PM |
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Okay so I have changed the song around since I sang it to my friend. Plz plz plz be honest! Let me know if it's too gushy or just all together sounds terrible.
Verse 1:
I want this to be the truth, so here I go again thinkin about the way it is and the way it should be. I'm not gonna lie you make me smile, maybe blush a little. When we talk the world stops like it's just me and you.
Courus:
I want you to know just how you make me feel. You make me smile, you makes blush, you make me laugh like no one else.
Verse 2 (Not finished yet): This should be the way it goes, do you agree? I don't know what it is (And this is where I got stuck hahaha I'm workin on it)
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JoJo
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| 02/07/2011 2:21 AM |
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it could be a little too gushy... Idk, I've written songs like this before, but Id never ever think to sing it to the guy, unless we were like very serious and had been dating for years haha...
but that's just me
idk wait for a few more oppinions b4 you decide, as I'm just thinking what I'd do |
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Turn up the music
Turn it up loud
Take a few chances
Let it all out
'Cause you won't regret it
Lookin' back from where you have been
'Cause it's not who you knew
And it's not what you did
It's how you live
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God Bless!
Mwah XOXO
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love*
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| 02/07/2011 10:14 AM |
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i dont rly think its to mushy since yall r going out (um i think? ) |
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 02/07/2011 12:25 PM |
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| I think Jo is right. Maybe it is a bit too much. Maybe just write a song that's not a love song... something to simply tell him how much you appreciate him without getting into the I love you stuff? |
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 02/07/2011 12:26 PM |
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Here's a love song I wrote, but no one's getting it sung to him until I get married
This ring on my finger is a pearl
I was daddy’s little girl
But suddenly, I’m not anymore
Cause you took my hand
And made me yours
You’re everything I ever dreamed of
Will you sing to me of love
I’m full of joy, can’t sleep tonight
Cause you took my hand
And you’re holding me tight
Unbutton my dress
I now give you my best
All I have is yours to hold
Cause you took my hand
And made me yours |
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