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| 08/01/2010 7:42 PM |
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| I saw there was a post made for miscellaneous posts, but I figured this would be better in a post of itself. I wrote this one night. This was kind of a means to express my feelings. I write poems or letters like this now and then. But tell me what you all think. This sound a bit creepy to give to my future wife, or sounds like I will get an "I DO"? Lol ok jk more like a "that's pretty sweet"?-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A Letter to my love-
Dear Wifey,
Hello. I don’t know your name, so I’ll just call you Sophia. Sophia, I love you. I love you more than you can imagine. I love you with every ounce of my heart, every atom that comprises me. I love you more than I love myself. You provide me with such joy. Just thinking of you puts a smile on my face. Every day I love you more and more. Your beauty is that of the cosmos -- so complex, yet so organized and flawless. You are like the first ray of sunshine in the early summer morning – the ray of sun which awakens the Earth and all of its inhabitants -- the ray that arouses the birds to sing such melodies that soften the ears which in turn allow peace to enter the mind. You are the ray that comes into the bed and massages the old, dreary bones that lie lifeless under the cold sheets. When you enter you spring life and happiness, peace and solace into the aura. Warmth and comfort come from your fresh, young palms. Your touch is that of many fine silks being slowly swept across the body. And so suddenly I am speechless. I cannot even begin to adequately describe the pleasure you give me. It would be wrong for me to continue to attempt to express my feelings to you in writing for the simple fact that it cannot be done. All that I have written could well be taken offensively. Why? Simply because as far as the east is from the west, such distance is this writing close to adequately describing your beauty. Furthermore the gist of this letter is to articulate your importance to me to you. I love you and it is only but a short time until I shall find out if such feelings will be reciprocated…
Love,
Your Future Hubby
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~NEW ME
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| 08/01/2010 9:20 PM |
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UM its me NEW~ME!!! Um yea definately an " I DO. " Jus say i have never heard such depth poured out of a guy before. I did nt kno guys really thought like that. Thats where your difference comes in. You are a very unique person. I dont kno any guy that is able to express themselves in such a respectfull manner. I do love your poem. If you dont mind me saying i would like to hear more of your poems if thats ok. Well hope you find this helpful |
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Beckah
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| 08/01/2010 10:27 PM |
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awwwww!!! thats so cool.. if i got a poem like that from my future husband, i would cry! lol 
i would have to agree with NEW~ME its FOR sure an 'I DO" |
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"Check yourself before you wreck yourself" |
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clare
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| 08/01/2010 11:09 PM |
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| Wait till you're married, it would mean so much more! I think we all have something or another we are going to give to our wife/husband. Letters or some little item. I know I do |
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Clockwork
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| 08/02/2010 1:42 AM |
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| Thanks for the positive feedback! It's just a way for me to express myself without having to go all googly-eyes over every girl I see. And NEW~ME I can post another one. |
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Clockwork
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| 08/02/2010 1:48 AM |
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| hey just check out my facebook i have a lot on their in my notes. Full name = Khareem Anthony Henderson |
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| 08/02/2010 11:58 AM |
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I dont have facebook sry. If you dnt want to necessarily post dem here i can give u my e-mail if you wanna send some there it does not matter |
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Clockwork
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| 08/02/2010 12:13 PM |
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| Well I don't mind posting them here, they are just a little long. I'll Post another one |
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Clockwork
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| 08/02/2010 12:23 PM |
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| They say its all fictitious,
but I hardly believe that lie.
The only thing I dream about,
I view everyday by eye.
I walk towards my locker,
and clumsily drop my books.
Then you walk right beside me,
and give me an awkward look.
I trip over my shoe laces,
while on my way to lunch.
You see me stumble and almost fall,
and begin to giggle a bunch.
I tried so hard to look my best,
while all the while i sweat.
The sweat slides slowly down my chest,
I now feel the need to confess...
Confess these feelings i have for you,
the reasons why im so clumsy.
The love I feel for you is so great,
I want you to be my honey.
My honey and sweety and beauty from above,
all such names I want to share.
And slide my fingers down your face,
and entangle them within your hair.
I know, I know, your far out my league,
such things ive already heard.
But still is it sin to love you much,
my heart everyday does yearn.
Yearn for you to love me back,
love is such a powerful word.
But then again what's love even mean?
It defined ive hardly heard.
So I say once more while I desperately conclude,
Fictitious? I know it is not.
Love of course is what I speak of here,
Because sweetness I love you a lot! |
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Clockwork
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| 08/02/2010 12:25 PM |
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| That poem is not supposed to be in that format. Sorry, but I don't know how t ostart a new line. Everytime I push the 'enter' button it still does not start a new line. Can't figure why...That poem is called the clumsy lover by the way. Not the best in the world but it captures my past feelings for a girl. |
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~NEW ME
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| 08/03/2010 1:30 PM |
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wow. I love that one too. I have a feelin i could sit an read ur poems all day long an not get bored lol. Na for real though. You are really good. Thank you for sharing this with me i really do love your poems. |
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Clockwork
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| 08/03/2010 2:25 PM |
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| lol well thanks. its just how i express myself though i dont really have any feelings ffor anyone right now. if you want more i can send to your email |
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| 08/03/2010 10:23 PM |
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| yea i would love to hear more. Let me kno an i will give u my e-mail ok no problem. |
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Clockwork
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| 08/04/2010 6:14 AM |
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| what is the address |
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| 08/04/2010 4:54 PM |
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| mkenziedance@aol.com |
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Clockwork
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| 08/04/2010 5:34 PM |
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| sent you one. hope you get it |
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~NEW ME
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| 08/04/2010 11:23 PM |
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| did nt get it yet clockwork. Will check again in the morn its 11PM here in north carolina. yea we really do live far apart lol. I still like tlkin to you ur a cool guy!!! |
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| 08/04/2010 11:24 PM |
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| sorry my bad. I did get it but for some reason it went to spam i dont know why tlk to you again later lol |
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Clockwork
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| 08/04/2010 11:25 PM |
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| lol oh ok |
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| 08/04/2010 11:36 PM |
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i sent you an e-mail back talk to you later. |
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